I recently finished first draft and now I’m in my first stages of rewrite. I’ve done a full read through and now I’m going through the notes from David Sutton. The first half of his copy was from before my rewrite, so it is messy, his reading requires valiant effort. A lot is fixed by the time he notices it, but it’s pretty gosh darn funny when he sees things that I didn’t catch when I wrote and read and rewrote.
Like this exchange. (I tried to remove spoilers, but use caution to the left side of the image.)
Then, a few paragraphs later.
A couple of paragraphs on…
and then, of course, four chapters later:
So, that’s how things are going here, ha ha ha…
(As I fix the mess up, now Lochinvar says it and fistbumps Quentin, and I carry on with the rewrites!)
This new story is really fun, I cannot wait for you to read it, April 27th!
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Yours,
Diana
Oh, my goodness!!! Love the back & forth with David! 😂 What in the world, not another shifting situation!! I can't wait!!!
Oh! I can’t wait 😍